wanting advice

[Big-T]

This is the first time I have ever posted a pic on the net and I really would like some critiques, be blunt and honest and please read what I wrote. If you guys don't mind I would apprechiate it. I know I have alot of work to do, but I wanta know if you guys see the same flaws I do.

 

[GDSGFT]

If you're speaking about the pic in your AVATAR, it doesn't show enough of you bro. Too hard to judge and critique..